creative writing

Yesterday Te Waka Ako did creative writing. We got to write anything we want because Mr Ross said that instead of the teachers saying what we have to write about. I wrote about a series called dragon ball super. It is about a man called goku, He is an alien but he looks like a human.He has very spiky hair and he is one of the strongest fighters in the universe, maybe even the galaxy. Overall I think I wrote a very long yet detailed piece of story.I hope you like the story. Please comment if you wish as I would love to see where my pros and cons come in.

The characters are:Universe 7(Goku, Vegeta, Krillin, Gohan, Lord Beerus, Whis) Universe 6(Cabba and Hit) Universe 11(Toppo, Jiren)